tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3567279315749400429.post723775199961814662..comments2015-06-02T08:48:33.816-07:00Comments on Risty's Library: The UmbrellaRisty Sabbryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04187284307088287694noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3567279315749400429.post-74799233166197458972011-10-23T06:25:33.471-07:002011-10-23T06:25:33.471-07:00awch! thx u ade for ur comment and advice here :D
...awch! thx u ade for ur comment and advice here :D<br /><br />yep! for d'next time i'll make a new story with different plot..<br /><br />ini sebenernya short story yg udah lama risty buat, tp di repost :D<br /><br />well, thx u ade for ur advice, baca jg yg lainnya yah.. ^^Risty Sabbryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04187284307088287694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3567279315749400429.post-9637068183347691962011-10-18T08:13:34.171-07:002011-10-18T08:13:34.171-07:00Good story line, characters in the story is good,I...Good story line, characters in the story is good,IMHO try to find the different location for the stories plot, from all the stories that i have ever read "when the rains comes, the characters often find coffee shops, why not try a more common such as fast food restaurant or "dagang bakso/mie" maybe. try searching for common but different than the others. you're talented risty :)Made Prama Krishnayakahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07240498498979644517noreply@blogger.com